I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia ora. I am Helen from Gisborne Intermediate School and I am a year 8. I really liked how you introduce yourself right at the beginning. I learnt that you like eating pizza and riding your horse kohurangi Maybe you could put a little more things about yourself and your school next time Please visit my blog here
Kia ora. I am Laqkwuann from Gisborne Intermediate School. I like how you're writing is so eye catching and full of so much interesting vocabulary I learnt that we both like eating pizza and drawing Maybe you could teach me how to ride a horse, it looks fun, or write a post about horse riding. Please visit my blog here
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Kia ora. I am Helen from Gisborne Intermediate School and I am a year 8.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you introduce yourself right at the beginning.
I learnt that you like eating pizza and riding your horse kohurangi
Maybe you could put a little more things about yourself and your school next time
Please visit my blog
here
Mā te wā
Helen
Kia ora. I am Laqkwuann from Gisborne Intermediate School.
ReplyDeleteI like how you're writing is so eye catching and full of so much interesting vocabulary
I learnt that we both like eating pizza and drawing
Maybe you could teach me how to ride a horse, it looks fun, or write a post about horse riding.
Please visit my blog
here
Mā te wā
Laqkwuann