I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
You’ve done an outstanding job on your Pepeha. I noticed you mentioned you’re from Byron Bay in Australia. Did you move to New Zealand recently? I lived in the Gold Coast for about 10 years. Australia is so hot compared to New Zealand but I like New Zealand because in Spring it has more flowers and less spiders.
Did you consider including an image of your maunga or awa to your Pepeha? Perhaps you could also make the image a little bigger so it is a bit easier for your readers to see.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Jett,
ReplyDeleteYou’ve done an outstanding job on your Pepeha. I noticed you mentioned you’re from Byron Bay in Australia. Did you move to New Zealand recently? I lived in the Gold Coast for about 10 years. Australia is so hot compared to New Zealand but I like New Zealand because in Spring it has more flowers and less spiders.
Did you consider including an image of your maunga or awa to your Pepeha? Perhaps you could also make the image a little bigger so it is a bit easier for your readers to see.
Hei konā mai,
Shannon